i really like the concepts of this, but i have a few suggestions, not that i'm the judge or anything, but i think it will really make this manip pop up on the main page...
i like your effects that stem from the facial objects, aka eyes, mouth, etc. but your originations where your manips start don't fade well enough into the main shot. for example, i would bring hte blood, or red drops, etc, into the eys and do some sort of brush gradient or a decay brush on the eye, so that it really gives it a illusionary effect that the eye bleeds and gives the offspring of the drops... same with the stitches... i think the ones on the shot are absolutely out of this world, i would just bring them a little more into the mouth so that the viewer sees them and thinks, 'oh god, that's painful', etc. hopefully this will help... i think you have done a fantastic job other than those things. what i see in my mind may not always be as easy as it is spoken, as i find in my own work, but it is worth the try with this one particularly. i think you have a great vision for this piece...
i agree. When I was finished, i wasn't completely satisfied with it. But I decided to be done with it before i screwed it up. However, I'm rather proud of how it turned out.
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i like your effects that stem from the facial objects, aka eyes, mouth, etc. but your originations where your manips start don't fade well enough into the main shot. for example, i would bring hte blood, or red drops, etc, into the eys and do some sort of brush gradient or a decay brush on the eye, so that it really gives it a illusionary effect that the eye bleeds and gives the offspring of the drops... same with the stitches... i think the ones on the shot are absolutely out of this world, i would just bring them a little more into the mouth so that the viewer sees them and thinks, 'oh god, that's painful', etc. hopefully this will help... i think you have done a fantastic job other than those things. what i see in my mind may not always be as easy as it is spoken, as i find in my own work, but it is worth the try with this one particularly. i think you have a great vision for this piece...
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